The basic concept itself was something I believe God gave me in Disneyland in June--though the execution did not go as expected. I had no idea my favorite character would be a human-looking robot! The entire thing will need rewritten from the ground up, and will probably need to be given a coherent plot. It's a pretty good candidate for if I ever try outlining.
Some people are impressed that I wrote 50,000 words in 30 days, but honestly, some of those same people could probably do the same thing if they just pushed aside all notions of quality and let the characters run wild. Such as...
“Erie sent me here to help,” Harris said.
“But you’re not...” Antonio trailed off. “Señor Papa--what do I do?” His face lit up in a slow grin, and Harris worried. He handed Harris an earpiece radio. “If you see anything amiss, I need you to tell me. This is set to broad to me, top priority.”
He smiled. “Did you want to arm me?”
“Not at this time.” Antonio looked around the vast hangar, now empty, almost as if scanning. He touched a panel and a closet door slid open. Antonio entered and rummaged for a few moments. “Yes. This will do. You must wear this.”
He handed him a black helmet, half the size of his torso, and furry with dust. No--furry with fur. “What’s this?”
“Your uniform,” Antonio said. He pulled out a huge black jumpsuit, made of fur, with a violet skirt around the waist and--no--a tail.
“I can’t wear that!”
“It’s climate-controled, with three views through the cameras. Señor Papa is sure a pilot such as yourself will have no difficulty navigating.”
He shook his head. “Did you have to pick a lady cat?”
“It is a good size for you,” Antonio replied with a smirk, looking down at him--he was a good foot taller than Harris. “And there are precious few of these suits left, for obvious reasons.”
“Because they’re horrible?”
Antonio frowned. “Because technology has greatly improved. Will you wear it?”
Oh yes. I don't know how it happened, but I went there.
Didn't get much of anything done today, except for a tiny amount of cleaning, and making some oven-baked potatoes which were quite good.
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