The Healer and the Pirate

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Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Writing Wednesday - Tucson Festival of Books - Grace Lin; Candace Fleming; Louis Sachar

So for me this week, I'm winding down my 25-paragraph outline for my WIP. Hooray! I'd love to have it done by Saturday, but I know myself and it's not that likely. Once it's done, I'm going to go through a few times to make sure it's coherent, perhaps run it past my favorite writing partner, and then if the Lord allows, I hope to WRITE!

Though Louis Sachar would probably advise not to talk about it...

Back to the Tucson Festival of Books AGAIN! I went to this panel to see Louis Sachar because I read and liked the Sideways Stories from Wayside School books when I was a little kid, and I missed the panel that was dedicated to just him. The other panelists were Candace Fleming and Grace Lin. The panel was ostensibly something about cross-genre something something, but it didn't really turn out that way, IMO.

I don't write children's books (the WIP I'm planning is Young Adult) but it was pretty interesting to go to a panel in a different genre than you're used to every so often.

I believe the first question was, why do you write "cross genre"? Louis Sachar noted that when he was younger, he remembered the world as a kid, but now that he has a 24-year-old daughter, he has trouble seeing 4th graders as anything but cute little darlings.

Candace Fleming was after my own heart. She has many interests (she mentioned that she wants to research Amelia Earhart and also bunnies). She called this her "adult ADHD." and thinks it "makes life interesting." Every day she goes to her desk and decides which topic to write about. (As an aside, I tried to take this idea to heart and have two projects going at once. Except I've got my co-authored novel, playing around with my co-author, and how many other ideas...!)

Grace Lin found that she was writing a picture book and tried to cut it down, but it wouldn't work as a picture book, so she had to write a novel.

Sachar noted that it always amazes him when someone comes up to him and says, "What happened to this character at the end?" He'd say, "I don't know. The book ended."

As for how long it takes to work, Fleming noted that it takes 3-5 years to research biographies--but she doesn't research every day. She visits big libraries and does big chunks at one time, like three weeks at a library.

Sachar said it took 6 drafts of a book and he does not talk about it until it's done. "If you talk about it, you never do it." "Not talking about it focuses me just on wanting to write it." He prefers rewriting, and says the first draft is like pulling teeth.

For motivation, he said, "I'm never going to write as good as Tolstoy; why bother?" But you're not trying to top anybody; you're trying to write the best you can write and hopefully people will read it. "The object is to try to write something that's really, really good. My belief is if you do that, you will get published."

Lin added that she realized she was never going to be a master painter, but that's OK. She said don't become an author to impress people, but because there is something in you you want to share with the world.

(Lin also some really interesting stories, noting that her mom kind of was like the Tiger Mom, and strongly discouraged her from being an artist. But, she said that actually drove her more, in that she had to be very successful to prove herself.)

For historical fiction, Fleming said to research as much as you possibly can and then hope you get it right. At the end of the day, it's about the character, and emotion stays the same throughout time. Fill it in with imagination and educated guesses.

My biggest disappointment of the panel, by far, was to find that Sachar only started liking reading in high school, when he read JD Salinger and Kurt Vonnegut. O_O

As for eBooks, picture book author/artist Lin focuses on how to make the book special so people will want to own it versus having it on a screen. It was mentioned that people may actually buy more eBooks, instead of going to the library.

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Writing Wednesday - Snowflake in Phoenix

No writing this week, but some planning. I'm slowly working on that snowflake for my new (OK, rewritten) novel. The idea behind the Snowflake Method is to start with a one-sentence description of the story, and work from there. My current step 1 of the snowflake says:

Brought to a world of magic, a high school girl battles the god who wants her for his priestess.

That's subject to change (i.e. get phrased better).

I have a paragraph-long summary of the plot (Step 2) and now I'm working on Step 3, which is where you explain the characters' storylines.

The Snowflake Method itself states that you should spend 1 hour on Step 1, 1 hour on Step 2, and then 1 hour for EACH character's storyline in Step 3. I spent over an hour on Step 1 (still not satisfied), and something in the ballpark of an hour on Step 2. But for Step 3, I just can't sit down and think about one character's story for a full hour, at least not since I already know 2/3 of the story quite well (it's just the last third that I'm really fuzzy on). For myself, I think it's better to run through that stage fairly quickly, and then double back once all the characters' stories are established. After all, I'm likely to come up with some ideas as I write each storyline, and what affects Bunfa may affect Kelar, and so forth.

The novel is young adult and was called "Chosen: Bonnie of Sheshack." Now I'm wondering if "Bonnie Greenfield, Priestess of Plants" might be better? Or maybe I just like the "P" noise since it sounds like "pirates...."

I also went to the VNSA Book Sale and got a (tiny) book on trees and an (equally tiny) book on flowers. I was born and raised in the desert so I know mesquites and palo verde and saguaros agave and ocotillo...but very, very little about plants that require larger amounts of water to survive.

So I'm (slowly) working!

AND, I ordered Charles Denson's Coney Island Lost and Found. I had a Groupon for Barnes and Noble, which I bought using the referral credit I got when my mom signed up. So my out-of-pocket cost, including tax, was less than $8. Not too bad! I'm hoping to eventually plot and write another novel with Maggie, set on, you guessed it, Coney Island.

Saturday, January 8, 2011

Saturday Bonus - Meek Heroes

Friday night I went to Corona After Hours (a.k.a. "loud church," or at least I call it that because of the rock music, which I like, but I always have to put in earplugs, even at concert!). Pastor Mike preached on the Beatitudes, and specifically:

Matthew 5:5: Blessed are the meek, for they will inherit the earth. (NIV)

Pastor Mike noted (correctly, IMO) that in today's society, it's especially hard for men to be meek and gentle, as it's not a quality valued in men. But that made me think of Suzanne Collins' "Hunger Games" (a kind of post-apocalyptic book--incredibly compelling, rather dark and not from a Christian worldview at all). Nadine has a pretty good review of it--though she was a bit more positive toward its morality than I am.

I think you could argue that Peeta, the male lead, embodies many of the Beatitudes, while Katniss, the female lead, rather does not. And I adored Peeta in that book (haven't read the sequels and don't plan to). While I found Katniss fascinating, I can't say I actually LIKED her as a person, exactly. It could be that she's too human, fair enough, but I really wanted to shake some sense into her...

That said, Peeta's gentleness makes me wonder if guys actually like Peeta, or if he's just a woman's fantasy. Thoughts? Can men enjoy reading a "meek" hero?

(EDIT: I answer a great question in the next post.)